Church story

is okay by me but if we go that route instead ,when Xantos fails to do as instructed should have me take him out,as that to me is what Bret would do,thus showing my role as the "enforcer/bodyguard"role which was our intent as far as how he and i relate.

ok. Sounds good, we could have you accompany Xantos to the ring for the rematch as Shayne will put you out there to make sure Xantos "plays by the rules" and then when Xantos refuses to use the chair, you go in and beat the hell out of him. Then Gomi can get up and attack you while Shayne and Eirik make their way to the ring to attack Gomi. It would then be a 3 on 2 until JTG come in for the save.

works for me,i also figure since all 3 of the church core members get along,we could even (if suits the story at the time) swap who is in the tags matches like if its me vs Xantos to teach him to listen to what Bret says..that leaves Eirik and Bret avail to tag.tho Eirik and i still clearly be the usual tag team,can switch it up some

I don't see any problem with that.

Get the ball rolling in the feud section now guys then.

Ok Shayne I want you to come up with a promo to introduce the CoS.

i think we should stretch out the xantos with us or feels awfully rushed to suddenly ditch like come in mid storyline or something.. instead should have it lopsided verse the faces for a while builds their face value.. and at some point Xantos approaches Bret about our tactics,like "enough is enough" and bret says somethign like "dont worry ill talk to them" and goes off screen,then we come back and we are stomping Xantos as per Bret's orders,to remove the weak from the congregation

yh ok.

Alright, I'll have a promo written by the end of the weekend. At a friend's place at the moment.

sorry I didn't chime in at all I didn't realize I was meantioned until just now, but I guess you guys got it worked out. Great job So that leaves Ultra for me?

it does indeed.

Though Ultra tags with Realdude on the game i think and when my m8 comes (Worthy) on thursday then want to become a stable so perhaps that fear inc. thing u have might come into fluition.

Sick as hell that's why I'm absent... will be back in a day or two.

ok.

I've posted the opening promo for the story. Hopefully it mets up with everyone's standards. Sorry that I didn't send it out to my team mates for pre-approval but hopefully it's still alright.

Yeah it was well done

lol approve what we didnt speak so you didnt give us lines out of context for us.. plus the idea is you as the focal point,ill get heat in individual feuds and do my talking in the ring.

lol well I purposely left out speaking bits for everyone else since I didn't have time to get approval from everyone. That's what I was referring to when I said that.

dont think this story is going to work out,no matter who the opponents are we never see any activity from them. Xantos wants out of the story,and think the overall feeling is we are all getting frustrated with rewrites and everyone else getting to advance their plots when first we waited forever on Zdensk,and now whoever the new guys are that we havent seen in days.Personally speaking i'm already burnt out on it before we even got to do anything,have plenty of other factions where this one wont be missed.may be easier for all concerned to just go their own ways and have solo feuds.Think Bret could do some great work if ever given a responsive opponent to work stories with and interact on promos.

Just for the record, I don't blame anyone for jumping ship or dropping the story. I'd like to stick with it though and I'm willing to re-tool it one last time to make it a one on one, or two on two feud. If that doesn't work, I'll drop the story.

Hey Bret,

If the CoS does decide to jump ship or even just Portis for that matter I could always jump in as I have a similar gimmick to you and you guys could join my feud with Niv. He and I are on all the time and we shouldn't have a problem finding a partner for him. I know JTG is looking for some action.

Sounds like a plan, get everyone to confirm that they'd be onboard and we'll work it out.

Well @ this point I think Portis is out. I'm assuming that Eirik is out with him, but I certainly don't speak for him so don't quote me on that. This thing is your vision and I am be no means attempting to take anybodies spot. I will make a new thread concerning all the parties involved and call it "The New CoS", so we can eliminate confusion.